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creative poem response

1.Use the sentences in the poem and talks about how music is here around us. 2.Own experiences of the poem by making sounds(music) music in life All the kinds of sounds can be music, rough sound, smooth sound, thunder. experience of music (all kinds of sounds in our life)

poem responce

1. my first impression of the poem is looking at the structure of the poem. Is the poem have clearly stanza or it's just a long paragraph. However, both of them makes not that good first impression for me. because the poem which has clearly stanza. It's really hard to understand what is it talking about. Words confuse me a lot. For the poem which are looks like paragraph, they are not as confuse as previous style, but I can not understand the structures clearly, it's also confuse me. First poem is "The everyday enchantment of music" It's the style of paragraph poem. As I read it first time, I feel it talks about a lot of sounds but author intercept is as music also with some comfusion. 2.Sometimes, It's impossible for me to understand the poem at first place. So I need to read it more times. As the times I read it, I know more what the poems are talking about. First poem: First time I read it I get nothing except it talks about sounds. Second time rea...

analysis three poems

1. The everyday enchantment of music This poem convey readers to be optimist. Figurative language : personification: tears of the sea fell from the Bridge of Sighs Author believes rough sounds can be think as smoother sounds. Also menacing could be music. Which want readers know to think optimist to something that is not what you like. 2.The Red WHEELbarrow It has four stanza. Each on them the last sentences only have one word that be the noun of the previous sentences. The theme of the poem is the first stanza which is" So much depends upon" Which tells readers there are lots of objects that you do not pay a lot tension that may helps you. In another word, the author wants readers to pay more attention on life details. 3.Boy and Egg The poem talks about a boy who is forgettable and self closing By using the words "pressed""laughed""leaving""brushed" vivd shows how self closing and bully by others. By telling this story, the...

fig lang

1.Percy is like twin with me 2.My twin is cloud 3.birds are dancing on the tree 4.Percy can eat 10 tons of snake tonight 5.firework makes the sound bomb 6.Mike mind miners in mind 7.he tries to light the fire 8.Mike likes his new bike

final draft reflection

1.I think I did well on my final draft, I have thesis statement and the quote support my thesis statement. 2. I improve the relationship with he quote and thesis and make more connections with them and I improve my gramma and closing sentences. 3.It's difficult for me to use correct formate to quote. Also it's difficult to analysis the quote properly. 4.my strength is make the structure of the paper but not good at gramma and logic. 5.I would improve more at analysis the quote and closing sentences. 6. good: thesis body paragraph prove the thesis quote connect with the sentences bad: closing sentences gramma errors sentences variation 

Final draft

Unstoppable love At most time, people will give up when they meet whatever kind of difficulties. Only a few of them are able to insist their belief. For example, when you are chasing a girl who you love. But she refuses you and makes you give up. Of course, if you give up and you would not successful chasing her finally. This way, you have to learn to how to solve the problems that you faces. The poem, "everything I need", teaches people that what they can do to chasing others even if they got refused. First, people shouldn't give up when the others refuses him. Sometimes people may give up just because of she refuses you. Because they believe that if she refuses me, I have no chance to chasing her anymore because she will be mad on me. This way, the author uses symbol of sea to tell readers not to give up and why: " Like the sea, should keep kissing the shoreline. No matter how many times he pushes her away." In the quote, it uses the symbol of sea and sho...

2 draft

Poem analysis of Everything I need At most time, people will give up when they meet whatever kind of difficulties. Only a few of them able to insist their belief. For example, when you chase a girl you love. However she refuses you and leads you give up. Of course, you would not success finally. This way, you have to learn to how to solve the problems your faces. The poem, "everything I need", tells people that they shouldn’t give up when they have difficulties chasing the person who you love. First, people can apologize to others when they make mistakes. However, most of people don't have an idea about how to well apologize to others. The poem shows the solution that what you should do if you made some mistakes before: “You can say I’m wrong. You can turn your back against me. But I’m here to stay. “The way that the poem do is not end up this relationship. But he apologizes and tells the person who love that he is waiting for her. By telling a story of apologize, r...

Literary analysis

At most time, people will give up when they meet whatever kind of difficulties. Only a few of them able to insist their belief. For example, when you chase a girl you love. However she refuses you and leads you give up. Of course, you would not success finally. As a result, the poem, everything I need, tells us people shouldn’t give up when they have difficulties chasing the person who you love. First, sometimes you get refuses because you did something wrong to others. The poem shows the solution that what you should do if you made some mistakes before: “You can say I’m wrong. You can turn your back against me. But I’m here to stay. “The way that the poem do is not end up this relationship. But he apologizes and tells the person who love that he is waiting for her. The author uses second person to make readers better understand the situation. Second, you must show you pay a lot of attention on the other. To express this situation, the author says: “Because you were meant for me, ...

song

Everything I need    Born on the wrong side of the  ocean    With all the tides against you    You never thought you'd be much good for anyone    But that's so far from the truth    I know there's pain in your heart    And you're covered in scars    Wish you could see what I do    'Cause  baby  everything you want    Is everything I need    You're everything to me    Baby every single part    Is who you're meant to be    'Cause you were meant for me    And you're everything I need    You can say I'm wrong    You can turn your back against me    But I'm here to stay    I'm here to stay    Like the sea    Should keep kissing the shoreline    No matter how many times he pushes her away    'Cause baby everything you want    Is everything I need    You're everything to me    Baby every single part    Is who you're meant to  be    'Cause you were meant for me    And everyt...

song

  Everything I Need完整歌词介绍   Everything I Need (Film Version) (《海王》电影插曲) - Skylar Grey (斯盖拉·格蕾)   Lyrics by:Skylar Grey/Elliot Taylor   Born on the wrong side of the ocean   With all the tides against you   You never thought you'd be much good for anyone   But that's so far from the truth   I know there's pain in your heart   And you're covered in scars   Wish you could see what I do   'Cause baby everything you want   Is everything I need   You're everything to me   Baby every single part   Is who you're meant to be   'Cause you were meant for me   And you're everything I need   You can say I'm wrong   You can turn your back against me   But I'm here to stay   I'm here to stay   Like the sea   Should keep kissing the shoreline   No matter how many times he pushes her away   'Cause baby everything you want   Is everything I need   You're everything to me   Baby every single pa...

reflection

the hard part of the performance is to not stun during speaking. Sometimes It's inevitable for me to be really fluent the easy part is to decide what to do other than speaking. Dancing and snap makes the presentation more interesting and snap. It's hard for the class to be perfect at performance. Because each group has some kinds of mistakes.