final draft reflection

1.I think I did well on my final draft, I have thesis statement and the quote support my thesis statement.
2. I improve the relationship with he quote and thesis and make more connections with them and I improve my gramma and closing sentences.
3.It's difficult for me to use correct formate to quote. Also it's difficult to analysis the quote properly.
4.my strength is make the structure of the paper but not good at gramma and logic.
5.I would improve more at analysis the quote and closing sentences.
6.
good:

  • thesis
  • body paragraph prove the thesis
  • quote connect with the sentences
bad:
  • closing sentences
  • gramma errors
  • sentences variation 

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