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in-class writing

1. What was your vision as a director/creator for this project? This project is about an autism kid who receive a message that his original physic teacher dead. Then he gets a new teacher which treats him well. Finally the original teacher comes back and the autism kid can't accept this changes and then decide to suicide. This story is appealing people that not to hurt others mentally. Because you don't know what will happened to them 2. What elements of the original story did you maintain in your project? The main character receive a message that makes him feel happy. Finally the main character can't accept the change of his/her life and dead. 3. What did you change about the original story in your project? The place is happened in a school instead of a house. The main character is an autism kid instead of a wife 4. What is the twist or climax of your adaptation? New teacher treats Talon very well and he feels hopeful about his life 5. What is the strongest part of ...

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s1 Talon is an autism kid s2 receive a message physic teacher Mr.Paris is very dangerous, close to died s3 Talon remind physic teacher always bully him s4 Talon celebrate with his only friend Rakan s5 Talon get a new teacher Mr. Yasuo next day s6 new teacher Mr.Yasuo treats Talon very well s7 week after original Mr.Paris comes back s8 Talon can't accept such big difference s9 Talon decides to suicide

create a modernized adaptation

1.genre drama 2.character 17 years old student, Percy Percy's best friend, Tony Physic teacher who was sent to ICU, Mr. Mike Physic teacher who give class to Percy, Mr. Schnur 3.setting classroom, 2 table, Percy sit with Tony classroom, Mr.Schnur classroom, Mr.mike Edge of the cliff, Percy, rainy, dark 4.plot A murder happened in a school at night 1am at night in dorm. Mr.Mike who always give Percy bad grade was sent to ICU and doctors tells school he has only 1% to stay alive. When Percy hear this news from Tony, it remind that bad grade you get and feels release. Percy will get a new teacher for the rest of your life and good grade. The new teachers Mr.schnur give Percy good grade for the lab that he assigned. However, when the lab just finished. The good teacher leaves school. When Percy sit in class and think about which new teacher will come. Mr.Mike comes back and says , only the grade I give comes into the grade book, that teacher's grade would not ...

Mordenize the story

Josephine has an home nurse that hide the secret that Josephine has lots of diseases of her body. But the nurse only tells she has heart disease but not head diseases and stomach diasease. However Richard knows it . While shielding Josephine, he uses knife to sword Josephine's stomach. It's the reason that she dead