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Unstoppable love

At most time, people will give up when they meet whatever kind of difficulties. Only a few of them are able to insist their belief. For example, when you are chasing a girl who you love. But she refuses you and makes you give up. Of course, if you give up and you would not successful chasing her finally. This way, you have to learn to how to solve the problems that you faces. The poem, "everything I need", teaches people that what they can do to chasing others even if they got refused.

First, people shouldn't give up when the others refuses him. Sometimes people may give up just because of she refuses you. Because they believe that if she refuses me, I have no chance to chasing her anymore because she will be mad on me. This way, the author uses symbol of sea to tell readers not to give up and why: " Like the sea, should keep kissing the shoreline. No matter how many times he pushes her away." In the quote, it uses the symbol of sea and shoreline. As we know, sea always goes up to the shoreline back and forth. This also means sea get refuses by the shoreline many times. But the point is the sea never gives up. By using these symbol. Those people who give up chasing others will get inspired. Because sea knows that it may get refuses, but at least it tried and what if one day it succeeded. In another word, people should trying to chasing the person who you love. Because you don't know weather she will refuse you or not and what if one day she accepts you. 

Second, people are able to apologize to others with sincerely words. However the truth is most of people even don't have an idea about how to apologize to others suitable. Because of it, the poem teaches people how to apologize: “You can say I’m wrong. You can turn your back against me. But I’m here to stay. “The first two sentenses shows apologize by saying proper words. However, most time only apologize is not enough. Because others may not accept the apologize. As a result, the third sentence states that I will wait for her until she forgives me. This way, the other moved by your sincere love. By telling the way of apologize, readers can effectively understand what the author talking about how to apologize . Also, the  uses second person takes readers into that situation and it's better for readers to understand the condition.

Finally, after she forgives you, people must show that you pay a lot of attention on the other. Because you have to prove you are really love the person who you love. however people only know the way of showing love others is to say I love you. It's definitely not work sometimes. Because that's too common that girls would think it's just words but not what you really want to say. This way, to teaching people how to express their love, the poem says: “Because you were meant for me, and you are everything I need. “In this quote, the character uses sincerely tone to express that she is his whole world. Clearly, it's more persuasive to the girl than only says I love you. Also, especially when she just forgives you, you have to say something really special and shows your love. Just as the quote says everything I need, which means you are special enough that I don't need anything else. Then the readers can understand the difference between two ways of expressing love. Also it can help readers who don't know what to do to express his love after the girl forgives him.

In conclusion, people must do something that effectively chasing others. It's fine if you did something wrong before, but you always have a way to save your relationship in some ways. You shouldn't give up is someone refuses you because of you did something that mad her. This way you should ask yourself: When there are some relationship broken in your life. Is it because you are not insist or you did it in the wrong way.