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in-class writing

1. What was your vision as a director/creator for this project? This project is about an autism kid who receive a message that his original physic teacher dead. Then he gets a new teacher which treats him well. Finally the original teacher comes back and the autism kid can't accept this changes and then decide to suicide. This story is appealing people that not to hurt others mentally. Because you don't know what will happened to them 2. What elements of the original story did you maintain in your project? The main character receive a message that makes him feel happy. Finally the main character can't accept the change of his/her life and dead. 3. What did you change about the original story in your project? The place is happened in a school instead of a house. The main character is an autism kid instead of a wife 4. What is the twist or climax of your adaptation? New teacher treats Talon very well and he feels hopeful about his life 5. What is the strongest part of ...

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s1 Talon is an autism kid s2 receive a message physic teacher Mr.Paris is very dangerous, close to died s3 Talon remind physic teacher always bully him s4 Talon celebrate with his only friend Rakan s5 Talon get a new teacher Mr. Yasuo next day s6 new teacher Mr.Yasuo treats Talon very well s7 week after original Mr.Paris comes back s8 Talon can't accept such big difference s9 Talon decides to suicide

create a modernized adaptation

1.genre drama 2.character 17 years old student, Percy Percy's best friend, Tony Physic teacher who was sent to ICU, Mr. Mike Physic teacher who give class to Percy, Mr. Schnur 3.setting classroom, 2 table, Percy sit with Tony classroom, Mr.Schnur classroom, Mr.mike Edge of the cliff, Percy, rainy, dark 4.plot A murder happened in a school at night 1am at night in dorm. Mr.Mike who always give Percy bad grade was sent to ICU and doctors tells school he has only 1% to stay alive. When Percy hear this news from Tony, it remind that bad grade you get and feels release. Percy will get a new teacher for the rest of your life and good grade. The new teachers Mr.schnur give Percy good grade for the lab that he assigned. However, when the lab just finished. The good teacher leaves school. When Percy sit in class and think about which new teacher will come. Mr.Mike comes back and says , only the grade I give comes into the grade book, that teacher's grade would not ...

Mordenize the story

Josephine has an home nurse that hide the secret that Josephine has lots of diseases of her body. But the nurse only tells she has heart disease but not head diseases and stomach diasease. However Richard knows it . While shielding Josephine, he uses knife to sword Josephine's stomach. It's the reason that she dead

play review

Play review of The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night-time The play is called “The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night-time” and happened in the black box theater in Cheshire Academy in November 15, 2019. The student director is Olivia Williamson and the major actors are Amelia Williams, Olivia Williamson and William Lempling.  This play is about an autism kid called Christopher who find his father Ed kills the dog and lie to him. Christopher wants to live with his mom Judy in London. Then his mom takes him back to take A level test and get a good grade. Finally his father apologize to him and give him a dog as a gift. The major theme of this play is about the relationship in an autism kid family. There are tons of scene about the discuss between Christopher and Ed or with Judy. Also the way of parenting Christopher changes. His father Ed always gets angry with Christopher because they have no way to have good discussion between them. Then the scene between Ch...

94-99 scene note

It starts with Christopher solving math problems. Siobhan tells Christopher it's not necessary to tell others how to solve the questions Ed wants to talk to Christopher and said very proud of him(Big change) Christopher wants to have a place where he can live alone Christopher really not want to talk to Ed at first. Ed really want Christopher to forgive him and give a gift to him with is a little sandy colored Golden Retrievers.(reflect with beginning) Christopher get an A on the math test. Siobhan really care the relationship between Siobhan and Ed Christopher wants to be an scientist/solve who kill the dog/find his mother by himself/wrote a book and turn it into play